Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-31403634-20180623061142/@comment-35356104-20180623103943

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This role shows independent quality & capability of self-supporting on top of its goal, so it should fit better in. If its killing power is scrap, it can potentially be Characteristics of every alignment are shown in the guideline above :)

Powerful attack is for...? But whyyy specifically, and  can't be kill for the first try? And whyyy only one of them can be kill by Hermit? Does included?

Stealing is somewhat sounds like the hybrid of  and. It's good but is it really necessary? It doesn't seems to aid its goal.

Detection immunity needs further discussion, but from what I see it is not needed.

Just a rough feedback. Excuse me for being straightforward, to be honest, I feel this idea is like a mashup of some random thoughts at first sight. It has no core idea and its concept doesn't go along with its lore. Every single element seems went out of place and there is hardly any linkage like how does "stealing last will" and "killing" end up together? I don't know about other reviewers, but I'm particular of this aspect. I believe this is the root of any role idea and many problems may present if the purpose isn't strong solid.

BTW, you have nice Profile Picture :P Im jealous