Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-33966114-20180703200500/@comment-25615841-20180704183554

OverTOP wrote: ATK - Besic

bésic*

DEF -None

alright

Unique: No

Skill : (Steal) You can steal from homeless houses

'''homeless? wait-- a HOMELESS house?'''

- You can steal from houses, if the resident of the house does an action you will atack him (Besic atack)

that's original

- You cand Steal from: Vigilante Doctor Bodyguard Survivor But older will have dis misage

can or can't?

- - Olders : The bandit steal from you

others* okay

- - Vigilante :  The bandit steall yor bulets you have 1 in yor gun

that makes sense

- - Doctor The bandit steall yor medkit

i dont think the doctor has a medkit--

- - Bodyguard % Survivor The bandit steall yor Bulletproof

Win Mision

-You win with Mafia,Covern.Witch,Survivals...Just kill town

'''that is a rehash of the witch. The win condition is the same as the witch's'''

Olders

- Sheriff yor target its a bandit

good

- Witch yor target its a bandit

'''no. that's way too basic. you need to put in more words before that.'''

- Investigator (pass)

you dont get to pass brother Main points:

-So, the first thing is that this role is extremely similar to the serial killer, with extra mechanics. I have to give you that the ability is new enough, but other than that it's pretty much entirely a rehash.

-Another thing is the role's goal. It is exactly the same thing is witch, and that's not good.

-Lastly, some other things that need fixing: The consig/witch result, the investigator result and some clarification is certain places

Overall, I'd give this a

maybe/10 IGN

Just remember that it really isn't easy to get your role to be approved my many, so if it doesn't get into the game, don't be too discouraged because very few actually do. Even with that I have to say that your idea is better than quite a lot of the roles out there :P

If you haven't already, please take a look at this page, it helps a lot when creating roles: http://town-of-salem.wikia.com/wiki/Making_New_Roles