Board Thread:Role Ideas (Mafia)/@comment-39067078-20190918002941/@comment-40087242-20190924103644

Duwiiton wrote: Original Name: Tax Evader

NAME

Evader ​​​​​​​ok

Summary

A tax evader who is great a falsifying results. ok?

Lore

(I can't make this without it being a meme. My writing skills are only so limited.)

Win Condition -

(Mafia Stuff)

Alignment -

Mafia Deception ok

Attack -

None ok

Defense -

None ok

Unique -

No ok 

Attributes -

At night, choose someone to fraud. ok...

Every word in their system messages tonight will not be able to appear in their system messages for 2 more nights. '''what? i just about had a stroke trying to understand what that means'''

Mechanics -

At night, choose someone to fraud. same sentence as attributes but okay

Every word in their system will not be able to be in their system messages for 2 nights (start n1, finish at n3/d4). what does this mean???

That's basically it. Really simple. i mean no its really not

This can basically act as a system remover, but lasts for longer and ruins results for several roles (sheriff, stop investigator from finding the real framer after searching a framed target, etc). '''ok i kind of get it now, but the way that it was written literally makes zero sense and would be confusing for people who have never played that role before.  also, if messages/notifications don't show up people will most liekly report a glitch in the game and will rpobably gamethrow/leave because they will think that the game isnt working. the role idea is some fourth wall breaking stuff and doesn't make sense in the salem witch trials context, let alone this role making any sense as a 'tax evader'. '''

In addition, the target will visit astrally to their target. thats dumb, this role is too OP if it cant be detected as a visit.

If you select a mafia, they will appear as non-suspicious for a night. mafia should not have the ability to visit themselves 

-Investigate Results-

Sheriff -

Suspicious ok

Investigator -

Lookout, Forger, Witch/Coven Leader, or Evader. there's already one mafia role in this investigative allignment, seems silly because theres so many other investigative results where it could fit

Precise -

Your target is great at lying. They must be the Evader! the abilities you described literally make no sense for someone who is 'lying' ????

Problems: This entire role. I just...

why?

It has too many mechanics that aren't even useful.

'''​​​​​​​that is not the problem, the problem is it doesnt fit in with the game whatsoever and its machanics would make the game seem like there's a glitch. I see where the idea was coming from but overall i think that it was not well thought out and would never actually work in a TOS game. '''