Talk:Mafioso/@comment-25900085-20141228181651/@comment-25900085-20141230200026

To the commenter, first off: I suggest before you criticize my story, you should use proper English so you don’t come across as a troll. Second, constructive criticism also outweighs just saying “omg u suck”. So kindly be constructive and respectful, or you’ll be ignored.