Thread:BlobbleTheDobble/@comment-28092296-20180502012642

Here's the same story but it's grammarly correct:

(Indent) The Tracker was a happy citizen. They  he/she were very good (Very weak adjective choice) at their  his/her ("Their" would imply there is multiple people) job, and had cought caught many members of (Add "of")  the Coven, but the m (Capitalization) Mafia allways elluded them him/her. Eventually, they  he/she stummbled (Anticlimactic) across a killing in prosses by the m Mafia, but there was a Lookout near the house (but not inside of the house, or otherwise close to witness the muder), which (Add an "h") mis s took (Only has one "s") the Tracker for the killer (But he didn't see the person that was the Mafia killing anybody?). In the morning, the Lookout revealed this ("This" is a very weak word choice), but the Tracker managed to run from the town, making it (What does "it" mean in this context?) all the way to Salem, (You framed this as if this was already in Salem. The Coven only took place in Salem, and you referred to the Coven as "the Coven") where he gave up their his/her job as a t Tracker (Capitalize) and has just  (Unnessesary word) been trying (add a "y") to keep their his/her past covered up ever sense  since (Wrong word). 