Board Thread:Role Ideas (Town)/@comment-34542544-20180201013516/@comment-34013628-20180201024754

ISkilled wrote: Role: Insurgent

Summary: You are a furious rebel who listens to no one in his attempt to bring all criminals to justice

Alignment: Town(Killing)

Unique role: Yes Thank god, if there would be more than 1 I don't know what I would do

Goal: Lynch every criminal and evildoer

Defense: none

Attack: basic

Abilities: You can stow away at someone else's house and kill them if they perform an evil act that night. Killing, Roleblocking, Framing, Dousing, and blackmailing count as evil.

So this is kinda like a Veteran/LO mishy mashy...

Attributes: If you stow away at a serial killers or werewolve's house on the night of a full moon, then they attack you, but you respond with a one night powerful attack from fear of death, and kill them too. You may only stow away four times.

4 TIMES!!

Sheriff results: Your target is not suspicious

Investigative results: Your target could be a Veteran, Vigilante, Insurgent, Mafioso, Pirate, or Ambusher

Consig/Witch: Your target burns with a fierce desire for justice. They must be an Insurgent!

Please give as much feedback as possible, this is my first time making a role. Thanks for your time and thought!

Ok heres what I have to say about this.

1. You didn't list that there would be a punishment for killing a townie. So thats like saying you stow away at a Jailor's house, and since the Jailor's jail function acts a roleblock, then you'll be killing the Jailor with no purpose. Same applies for Escort and Pirate, they aren't really harming the town, and this role punishes them for doing the necessary action they have to do.

2. 4 Times is one to many. I can only imagine the insanity that would happen. You didn't really specify if the action is used up when the action happens, or if you just visit someone in general. I think 3, and maybe even 2 is enough.

3. Basic and a Powerful attack? It wouldn't really make sense that you would be able to kill a Serial Killer and WW with a Powerful attack, and then leave other Immune roles like Godfather, Executioner, and CL/Witch like that

Overall, this role sounds good, but it needs work.

Rejected for now, but try and fix it