Board Thread:Role Ideas (Town)/@comment-2A02:A03F:48A8:4300:541B:AB2B:DC39:1646-20180621193223/@comment-25615841-20180629181359

2A02:A03F:48A8:4300:541B:AB2B:DC39:1646 wrote: summary:you are a man that avenges your friends

right.

alignment:town killing

these are good

abilities:you may choose 3 people to be your friends

what?

attributes:d1 choose 3 people to be friends with. When a friend dies you will deal a powerful attack to the attacker. If the attacker is a town member for example vigi or jailor then you will not kill them. If a friend is revived by a retributionist then they you cant avengthem anymore. If a friend is hangd then you may choose a new person to be your friend. You can whisper to your friend and it wont show up in chat.

'''Have fun putting that on a role card. Anyway, this confirms any vigilante, and is pretty op. a powerful attack? I get you want the NK dead, but this would shred through anything.'''

'''also, the friend system is kind of flawed seeing as you have nothing to base this off and would often choose evils. Besides that, what would happen if you just didnt choose anyone d1? what then?'''

investigsative results:investigator:your target could be an avenger, spy or jailor ( coven expansion gaurdian angel is also there)

'''what about bmer..? 3-1-0-1, which pretty much confirms the player is good. This isn't good.'''

sheriff:ns

consigliere:your target avenges his friends. They must be an avenger

'''Lame. Really basic, no offense, but it seems like you put no time into this. '''

goal:lynch every criminal and evildoer

victory conditions:

wins with:town, survivor, pirate, guardian angel

must kill:mafia, vampires, arsonist, serial killer, werewolf, witch/coven, plaugbearer/pestilence, juggernaut

all of these are good First off,

--Way OP. It's like a delayed BG that protects three people at once. Sure, your targets aren't guaranteed to be town, but to god is this overpowered.

-Other than that, change the consig result, and maybe shorten down the attributes a bit so they're not as clustered and can actually fit on the role card.

+At least it's original. Though not every aspect is exactly new, some parts of this being quite similar to bodyguard, I do like the vengeance mechanic, since it's new. Still way overpowered though :P

+Overall, the details are pretty good. I see no problems with the goal, stats, results or anything of that kind.

Overall, I'd give it a

ehh maybe/10 IGN

Just remember that it really isn't easy to get your role to be approved my many, so if it doesn't get into the game, don't be too discouraged because very few actually do. Even with that I have to say that your idea is better than quite a lot of the roles out there :P

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