Board Thread:Role Ideas (Town)/@comment-31680260-20170703040004/@comment-29253708-20170703064957

Jallybwan wrote: We already know the Invest's results are a bit lacking (Hypnotist rips off the Invest's results and Juggernaut doesn't even have one) so imma fluff it up a little! With the exception of a few roles, the actual results will stay the same (just the text is changing):

 Investigator 

Your target has a fondness for guns. They could be a Vig/Vet/Maf/Pirate/Ambusher.

Old one is better

Your target is tied in with the afterlife. They could be a Med/Ret/Jan/Necro. (Trapper will go somewhere else lol)

I like it, up for debate tho

Your target shies away from society. They could be a Surv/Witch/VH/Medusa/Psychic.

Old one is much better

Your target knows things that nobody should know. They could be a Spy/BMer/Jailor/GA.

This doesn't apply to GA in any way

Your target deals out harsh justice. They could be a Sheriff/Exe/WW/Poisoner/Trapper. (This one needs work, but at least Sheriffs have something more than evils in their result)

It's okay

There is something strange about your target that you can't quite place your finger on. They could be a Framer/Vamp/Jest/HM/Juggernaut. (Couldn't find anywhere else fitting of Jugg)

Old one is better

Your target has the undeniable ability to blend in with a crowd. They could be a LO/Forger/Amne/CL.

Old one is much, much better

Your target is skilled at disrupting others. They could be an Esc/Trans/Consort/Hypno. (This one's fine)

Agreed

Your target has some... interesting information to share. They could be an Invest/Consig/Mayor/Tracker/PB. (Slight change)

'''Having the ... is really bad formatting for an investigation result, so no'''

Your target's clothing is stained with a sharp-smelling substance. They could be a BG/GF/Arso/Crusader.

Old one is better

 Consigliere (Strikethrough text is to be laughed at, not taken into consideration) 

Your target is a trained protector. They must be a BG. (This one's fine)

Agreed

Your target is a professional surgeon. They must be a Doc. (Same)

Agreed

Your target knows how to give people a good time. They must be an Escort. (lenny face here)

I obviously don't like this one, but the old one is much better anyways

You noticed your target snooping around. They must be an Invest.

That's kind of what all Investigative roles do...

Your target frequents the detention area of the town. They must be the Jailor. (needs work)

Old one is better

You saw your target watching someone from the shadows. They must be a LO.

Old one is better

Your target owns secret official documents. They must be the Mayor.

Old one is much better

Your target owns a Ouija board, which you just figured out how to spell correctly. They must be a Med.

Definitely meant as a joke

Your target lurks around the graveyard, kneeling at each tombstone. They must be a Ret. (needs work)

Old one is better

Your target's cowboy outfit is simply ridiculous. They must be a Sheriff.

Definitely meant as a joke

Your target is now useless. You caught your target watching the Mafia! They must be a Spy.

Old one is better

Your target owns a white van. Your target is a professional chauffeur. They must be a Trans.

Old one is much better

Your target reeks of garlic and carries a wooden stake. They must be a VH.

This is okay

(If the Vet alerted) Your target just shot you in the face! If you had to hazard a guess, you would say that they were a Vet.

Investigation results don't change just because the Vet alerted

(If the Vet didn't alert) Your target aimed a gun at the door for the whole night. They must be a Vet. You got lucky.

'''"You got lucky?" That doesn't fit with an investigation result either'''

At least your target's heart is in the right place? They must be a Vig.

Old one is much better

Your target can find dirt on absolutely anyone. They must be a BMer.

Old one is better

Your target is much more skilled than that pathetic Investigator. They must be a Consig.

DEFINITELY meant to be a joke.

Your target is way better at her job than the Escort. They must be a Consort.

'''Okay. No. Rejected. Kill it with fire.'''

You can't quite tell what your target is, so they're probably a Disguiser.

Obv rejected

Your target has an unhealthy obsession with paper. They must be a Forger.

Yeah, I get that bibliophilia or whatever it is exists, but this is bad for the Forger.

Your target is a great artist. Your target has an intimate knowledge of counterfeit actions. They must be a Framer.

Eh...

You look up to your target immensely. They must be the GF.

Some GF's I've played with are absolute crap so...

You consider your target your brother. They must be the Mafioso.

Eh...

Your target is bumbling around in a daze. They must be an Amne.

Old one is better

Your target chuckles when he looks at the fireplace. He must be an Arso.

I actually kinda like this one but the old one is still better

Your target has a distinct hatred of a specific person. They must be an Exe.

Same as Arso here

Your target is a raving lunatic who desires public execution. They must be a Jest.

Also

You noticed your target giggling and sharpening a knife. They must be an SK.

Old one is better

Your target is a poor, innocent soul harassed by the Town. They must be a Surv, the poor thing.

'''the poor thing? That is DEFINITELY not good for a Investigation result <_<'''

Your target speaks in a fake Transylvanian accent. They must be a Vamp.

Definitely meant as a joke

Your target is obsessed with the full moon. Also, they're a beast. They must be a Werewolf.

I would get rid of "Also, they're a beast.", then I guess it's okay

Your target is intimately familiar with the arcane. They must be a Witch.

Old one is better

Your target is a nerfed BG that shouldn't exist. Your target is an overzealous, inexperienced "protector". They must be a Crusader.

'''Old one is better, and having "protector" in quotes just looks so bad. Sarcasm is not meant for investigation results'''

Your target knows things they really shouldn't be able to know. They must be a Psychic.

Same with everyone else in the town

Your target stalks people in the dead of night... are they really innocent? They must be a Tracker.

Asking a question shouldn't be in an investigation result either

Your target's house is lined with taxidermied deer heads. They must be a Trapper.

I mean, the other one is trash but eh...

Your target was wearing a cheap camo outfit that somehow tricks those idiot Townies. They must be an Ambusher.

Rejected for reasons that should be obvious

Your target can somehow alter the memories of their "patients". They must be a Hypnotist.

The other one is trash as well, but eh...

Your target is charged with the protection of someone. Also, they have wings and a halo. You're pretty sure they are a GA.

you're "pretty sure"?

Your target must be stopped before they become too powerful. They must be a Juggernaut.

Old one is better

Your target stinks so much it killed you. Your target's noxious aura was too much for you to bear. They must be Pestilence, Horseman of the Apocalypse. (You have died!)

Old one is better

Your target downloads movies illegally. Your target rambles on and on about his love of "booty". They must be a Pirate.

Definitely meant to be a joke

Your target desperately needs a bath. Your target exudes a sickening aura. They must be a Plaguebearer.

Old one is better

Your target was exiled by the Town a long time ago. They must be a CL.

This one is okay, but not sure

Your target is well-versed in the ways of hexes. They must be a Hex Master. (Slightly changed)

Old one is still better, I guess

(If the Medusa decided to gaze) Your target just turned you to stone. Gee, what could they possibly be?

Same reason as Vet, rejected

(If the Medusa did not gaze) Your target seriously needs a better wig. Your target is a hideous creature with snakes for hair. They must be a Medusa.

This one isn't bad .3.

Your target was originally a Neutral Killer. Your target summons the deceased to do their bidding. They must be a Necro.

I think the old is better

Your target concocts interesting brews to kill their victims. They must be a Poisoner.

Not sure

Your target has a variety of strange mixtures in their possession. They must be a Potion Master.

Old one is better You're putting a lot of jokes and just random stuff that doesn't need to be included in here. Investigation results are meant to be serious, not joking around with "haha you said booty". They need to have a certain formatting. One sentence, and straight and to the point. You didn't do that for many of these.

The other point is that the old results are just better in general. There's a reason they were implemented, because they were a good description for the role, and BMG was happy with them.

The only one I really liked here was the Vampire Hunter's Consig result, but that's because it's more descriptive and we all know I love that.

So there, those are my thoughts.