Board Thread:Role Ideas (Mafia)/@comment-2607:FCC8:EF05:8901:71D0:E7D:FE9C:B28F-20190105143121/@comment-47.196.114.183-20190112015844

2607:FCC8:EF05:8901:71D0:E7D:FE9C:B28F wrote: Name: Hitman mmaky Alignment: Mafia Killing nonononononononononononono oh god OH GOD

Background: He was once a veteran in the town, but one night he was thrown in jail by the jailor. The jailor was very abusive and ungrateful towards him. The Godfaher was looking to recruit some new membersof the Mafia, and the Veteran became the Hitman. ehhh, just gonna say the backstory seems really unpolished.

Attack: Basic/Powerful '''Powerful attack mafia... no'''

Defense: None okay good

Unique Role: No that is a BIIIIIIT op for a mafia role with killing ability.

Abilities:

Carry out the Godfather's hit orders. sounds okay I suppose.

Attributes:

-You can talk with the other Mafia at night. alright

-You can put a hit on whoever you want if the Godfather doesn't give you orders. so like mafioso?

-Once there's a hit put on someone, you will attack them with a Basic Attack every night until they die. '''sounds, like, really stupid. if you hit an NK you'll just keep attacking them'''

-If 2 or more people visit you in one night, your attack will increase to powerful. By then you'd most likely be outed and lynched

Mechanics:

-The Godfather will have two* buttons at night. A blank button for the Mafioso and a button that says "Hit," for the Hitman.

okay so he controls two of his mafia while the other goes off doing their own thing, but this role isnt unique, so what happens if there is two hitmen?

-You will be told if your power increases. okay.

Investigative Results:

Sheriff: Your target seems suspicious. '''Your target is suspicious. should be the correct one.'''

Investigator: Your target could be a Mayor, Jester, or Hitman. '''Do NOT make up your own investigative results. That is a huge no-no. use one of the ones already in place, or dont make the role at all.'''

Consigliere/Witch: Your target sneakily kills others for an evil society. They must be a Hitman. '''evil society lmao. not very flavorful of a result'''

Goal: Kill anyone that will not submit to the Mafia. righto

Wins with: Mafia Standard good

Must kill: Mafia Standard good

Reason: I think that Mafia needs another role that can kill out of the gate. I like the thought of a Hitman working for the Mafia. '''yeaaahhhhhh no. Mafia got ambusher in the coven expansion, its already swingy, and mafia getting 2 kills per night is REALLY overpowered. If this was in coven, 3 mafia kills at night is stupid broken and it would never get implemented. '''

My Main Concerns are: Ok, good, you atleast acknowledge that there might be a problem.

-Should this be unique? '''YES! GOD YES'''

-Is it too OP? YES

Please give me any feedback you have! Thanks,

The Boio (you'll know if I made it if it has "The Boio" at the end.) Absolute trash. The golden rule of the Mafia roleboard is to NOT make a Mafia Killing that is overpowered. You made up investigator results, which are a huge no. Mafia doesn't need more kill power. It seems to me like you're new to creating roles, and yes, it's okay to make mistakes, but not this. This is a mistake that is not okay.

Not to mention, you're breaking rule making guidelines. This idea of a role is overpowered, and you're not the first or last to make something stupid like this. Remember to check the making new roles page before you make something like this again.
 * Independent Mafia Killing - Any Mafia Killing role that kills on its own, giving Mafia two kills.

http://town-of-salem.wikia.com/wiki/Making_New_Roles   <-- Here is the link. Read up on it.

Don't be too discouraged, but don't make stupid roles.

Like Camerondamina said above, this is just a buffed Mafioso, and its OP.