Board Thread:Role Ideas (Other)/@comment-209.249.55.37-20190317222747/@comment-76.174.12.30-20190405190017

Bovajan wrote: 76.174.12.30 wrote: This faction kind of sucks.

I Normally give Normal criticism but there were so many spelling mistakes that I have to give you Harsh.

Pillager Captain - Okay. Assassin - This is such a bad idea. Not only does Astral Attacks literally break the game, but high defense and attack aren’t okay. Why are astral attacks bad and why are high defense and attack bad ```astral attacks are bad for the fact that they render several classes useless, such as bg and the likes.

BG? Useless. LO? useless. High defense is stupid because you can't be killed by SK and can only be lynched unless hit by an unstoppable, which are rare. Powerful attacks are bad because they render abilities useless, such as survivor Vest.'''

This is an absolutely horrible idea, I will see that this won’t happen again.

Kidnapper - That’s kind of situational. It’s jailor but with 15 jails (Ranked Practice). I also assume you can execute. That’s horrible and broken. Change it so that you can’t execute and it’s all good. how is killing someone broken '''You RB them AND protect them from people. You shouldn't be allowed to kill them because of the fact that Mafia and Coven also exist.'''

Maurader - Literal Garbage. Select your team, and make all of them non-detectable. This is horrible. If you select your team, you can’t get lynched except by luck. Beyond garbage. '''then there are roles like ww on non-full moon nights, arsonists, coven with necronomicon, plaguebearer, vampires, pestilence, pirate, godfather, juggernaut. they all are non-detectable. I actually like the idea. It hides the faction from sheriff, but they are more likely to be called out when found by an investigator.'''

'''First of all, these all have situations. WW is only active on Non-Full moon. Arsonists have incredibly bad claim space and are sus if no SK or WW. Coven don't get it until round 3, and only one of them gets it at a time. Plaguebearers are similar to Arsonist. Vampires are neutral chaos, meaning they're not meant for real play. Rather, they're easily lynchable from bad claimspace. Pirate is also Neutral Chaos, and isn't always evil with the fact that it can win with anyone. GF and Juggernaut are main forces to be reckoned with, and even then not common since there can only be one*
 * Maf can promote to GF'''

Sorcerer - WTH? THIS DOESN’T EVEN FIT THE PIRATE THEME. Way too strong. Powerful defense to an ally and basic defense Is way too much. No classic roles to my knowledge have powerful defense. '''except for veteran who alerts, someone healed by doctor. but i agree that this shouldnt be in the game since its just a potion master'''

'''Even then, veteran alerts don't regenerate their uses and are rendered useless after about N6 if they reserve some alerts. As a Pillager, you know all others and therefore know you won't be attacked as TK are risky. Doctors only have ONE ability and can't kill or reveal in any way. It's not as potent as literally being able to kill, protect, or reveal.'''

Overall score:

Grammer: 0/10 Balance: 0/10 Fun: -5/10

Overall Score: -70.2/10 ​​​​​​​0+0-5 = -70,2 '''If you actually attempted to make a fool of me by doing math for that you must not get the point of giving you a -70.2. It's so obvious that I did the math wrong to exaggerate your bad concept. Not only that, but you can't take criticism, which is the bane of all writers.

I understand I was harsh on you, but for good reason. You need to be able to take criticism.'''