Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-36926014-20180916023930/@comment-36164641-20180916041744

WellHidan wrote: Name: Shopkeeper I saw a role idea with the name Shopkeeper, hope this isn't the same one. Alignment: Neutral (Benign) OK.

Story: help me out here No need for a story.

Summary: You bribe people with "gold" you earn everyday. '''Might be better to use "Briber"? IDK.'''

Unique: Yes Good.

Attack: None Yeah, standard for Neutral Benign.

Defense: None

Abilities: You have a day ability where you get 1 "gold" everyday. Once you get 3 "gold", you can spend that gold to bribe a person and make him (do what he does) to you or someone else of your choosing. Yeah, the name "Briber" is better than "Shopkeeper", judging by how the role works. For example, if you bribe a jailor, he will jail a person that you choose. If you bribe a bodyguard, he will protect you.

Investigate Results:

Sheriff: He is not suspicious. Correct message: Your target is not suspicious.

Investigator: He likes to make people do his bidding, he could be a Shopkeeper, Godfather, or Blackmailer! '''Do not make your own Investigative results. A better suited one would be "Your target is a Bodyguard, Godfather, Arsonist, or Shopkeeper" because they fit into the description "Your target is not afraid to get their hands dirty."'''

Consigliere: Your target bribes people with gold every night to do his bidding, he must be a Shopkeeper!

Goal: Survive with either Mafia or Town '''Why not Neutrals, as mentioned in an earlier post? Make it "Survive until the end of the game".'''

Hope you guys like my idea! Feedback incoming:

'''1. The word Shopkeeper isn't really a fit for this role. Maybe "Briber" would be better.''' '''2. This is a Neutral Witch that takes too long. It's essentially a rehash.''' 3. It takes you 3 days to actually do something, which is a waste of time.

'''It's an ok role. But, because of the "gold" system, it takes forever to get something done. Once that problem is eliminated, it reveals another layer of "Witch Rehash" which is not good. Other than that, it's an interesting concept.'''

I give it a "needs improvement"/10 ​​​​​​​