Thread:Slugkitty/@comment-37322933-20190330020511/@comment-35813313-20190330021551

First of all, I'm not a good writer. Not by a long shot. But thanks for the compliment :D

I could give you advice, but I'd use my own writing style to critique it; that wouldn't make the story your own. I try to avoid this, but it inevitably happens.

I'll see what I can do and give you critiques in the comments of the post; whether you accept the critiques I make or not is entirely up to you.