Board Thread:Role Ideas (Mafia)/@comment-34747476-20180702085432/@comment-25615841-20180702173942

Enlay123 wrote: Name:Milionare

'''eh. alright, i guess, though it's kind of an odd one out when it comes to names.'''

also sounds like it'd fit better for a neutral.

Mafia Support

Attack:None          Defence;Powerfull

'''aaaand, no. this isn't allowed. no mafia roles can have a defense.'''

Abilities:

If you target someone you will make them mad and can only target one player at the next night

the one player is always the Milionare

'''what kind of drugs are you on? waattt'''

if you target someone who is not a visiting/attacking role nothing will happend

If you target someone you will get a Powerfull attack and you will kill the visitor

If you target a member of the mafia it wont work

You can only use your ability 5 times

'''this isn't gonna fit on the role card, and it's way too cocnfusing holy shit. im now gonna try to decypher this;'''

'''5 times per game you can target a player who will then be killed or will kill whoever they visit. so; five kills per game. NO.'''

Wins with:same like mafia

must kill:same like mafia

okay

Weakness;Pestilance,Mafia members,CL/Witch

'''weakness? are we playing tos or pokemon?'''

Investigator:Framer,Jester,Vampire,Milionare

welp, can't really review this result.

Sheriff:your target is a member of the mafia

good

Consigliere:Your target loves to make people jealous,they must be a milionare

that's actually decent, a lot of people fail here

story:

There was a man who has so much money that he is so descipable,he wanted everyone to be jealous with him

he started to hire some bodyguards while hes at home

but one day,someone came to his house and was SUPER MAD about what has he done,the man insulted him

he is so angry that he was Insulted that he punched him,the man ran away

He is still angry that he decided to work with the mafia just to destroy this tiny little puny town

he gave the some money,the  accepted him and gave him a shotgun

after that night he was making more people jealous with him,one night he was visited by the man who insulted him,the man has a knife and tried to stab him,he donged it and pulls out his shotgun and BANG! the man died he feels relief and after that he decided to work even longer and he decided to work with the mafia FOREVER,he started to make people VERY jealous and angry,one night 4 people came over his house,and after they opened the door.... they realized they made a big mistake,BANG!. he shot and shot and shoot,but at one day he ran out of ammo,he hears the door open,and the next day he was dead

not here to review the story Main points:

--I linked a making new roles page beneath, and it mentions this: Night Immune Town - Any Town role that is Night Immune. Same applies for mafia.

--Independent Mafia Killing - Any Mafia Killing role that kills on its own, giving Mafia two kills.

-Though I'll admit I barely understand this, it looks OP to me. Seems like it's something along the lines of five powerful attacks

-Another thing is that if neither Retro or I can understand this, something is wrong with your role. It's so confusing, not only would new players struggle playing it, you couldn't explain it inside of a role card. You'd need something more along thelines of a 200 page manual.

Overall, I'd give this a

no/10 IGN

Just remember that it really isn't easy to get your role to be approved my many, so if it doesn't get into the game, don't be too discouraged because very few actually do. Even with that I have to say that your idea is better than quite a lot of the roles out there :P

If you haven't already, please take a look at this page, it helps a lot when creating roles: http://town-of-salem.wikia.com/wiki/Making_New_Roles

Lastly, the structure could be better. I'm not gonna lie, just like Retro, I understood barely anything and it was kind of a pain in the ass to read.