Thread:ZedKiller13/@comment-31256456-20170519164419/@comment-27575896-20170519174055

Your edits are fine! Technically, try just adding strategy, capitalization, any wording changes that relate to better grammar, spelling, ect.

If you make a mistake or see a wording glitch, you can talk to me about it. I can give you the lay-down on how to fix those.