Board Thread:Role Ideas (Town)/@comment-35420390-20180519162551/@comment-25615841-20180519193227

BendBones wrote: Name: Deputy

decent for once

Alignment: /

its definitely gonna be one or the other, lets see

Summary: You're a law enforcer, using aggressive methods to fint the evildoers.

umm..okay?

Backstory: the Sheriff never liked me, I could tell by the way he looked at me. I figured he didn't like me for how i did things. He was always calm, and usually just interrogated people. I figured that wasn't effective and started to strom peoples house to take them off guard when they did the planing on murderous acts. But the Sheriff trused me so little, that the night before he went into hiding i heard he talking to the Investigator about me. He said the following: "I can't stay here anymore, the Mafia will kill me. And since the "deputy" gives them information i bet they will get past the security and get it done before i get to do anything." And thats the last thing i heard from him. The next day he was gone, and i can't remember why, but after that i brought with me my shotgun on every raid i have done.

not here to rate these--

Attack: Powerful

oh god, this is a townie

Defence: None / Basic (with vest)

'''you have a vest as well? o.0'''

Ability: Each night you may decide to storm someones house.

oh boy

Attributes: Storming someone who was going to kill someone will result in you being attacked instead and you attacking your target (kinda like a ). If your target is attacked you will be attacked instead, but wont attack back. Storming a will result in he recognizing you. You may select yourself to put on a bulletproof vest. You have 1 vest.

'''so its like a bg that visits the attacker. That is actually really interesting. I was quite underwhelmed to this point but I like this a lot.'''

'''It also seems quite powerful at first, but nice balancing on the part where you just serve as a meatshield. Also, the vest is a good idea to me.'''

Anyway, make this TP.

Investigation results: 


 * Your target is a member of the !

NO, no, no, NO. we're not nerfing sheriff


 * ,, , , or Deputy

3-2-0-1, which is ay okay


 * your target is a aggressive law enforcer working under the . They must be a Deputy.

not bad either.

not bad actually

Goal: same as

Messages: 

"He was killed by a Deputy" - Deputy killing someone

"He died under a police operation" - Deputy dying by being attacked "on the job"

"A Deputy stormed your house, so you attacked him!" - Deputy storming someone who was planing on killing someone.

"A Deputy stormed your house!" - Deputy storming someone who wasn't planing on killing someone.

"You recognized 's face as the Deputy!" - being stormed.

cool mechanic Main points:

+I guess you could call this role bland, but it does have a few extra mechanics to spice things up. Overall I've got to say it would probably be awesome to play as. It's simple enough, which is a great thing since even the newest of players can understand it.

+The invest results and all the other minor things all appear to have been nailed

++Well balanced. I don't see any glaring mistakes when it comes to balancing, this role is neither OP nor UP, which is great

++Nice and original, it's like a mix or BG and something completely new. It's fresh, and even the vest part makes sense. This is the TP role we've been waiting for.

I'd give it a:

gold star/10 IGN

To me, this looks like a really hecking good role. It's an original well balanced TP with everything nailed. If there's any bit of critisism I can give, it's to improve the consig result and summary, but those are already a lot better than the usual ones.

Seriously, take it from me that this is a really good role. I suggest putting it on the forums. Heck, I like it so much this is going on my wall, you've got potential!

Just remember that it really isn't easy to get your role to be approved my many, so if it doesn't get into the game, don't be too discouraged because very few actually do. Even with that I have to say that your idea is better than quite a lot of the roles out there :P

If you haven't already, please take a look at this page, it helps a lot when creating roles, though I strongly doubt you've never seen this taking a glance at the quality of this role: http://town-of-salem.wikia.com/wiki/Making_New_Roles

Also, nice job on the templates, that's pretty rare :3