Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-35813313-20181225034034/@comment-38161154-20190121194530

Jallybwan wrote:

Also, in regard to "She wasn't invited to the daily discussions of the magistrates of Salem (and why would she? According to them, she's a little girl who doesn't know enough.), but she has done some snooping herself." - the punctuation and syntax makes it a little confusing to understand without reading it twice. I'd recommend changing it to:

"She isn't invited to the daily discussions of the magistrates of Salem. Why would she be? According to them, she's just a little girl who doesn't know enough. But she has done some snooping herself." (Word changes are marked in bold.) she's was in there previously. Didn't you mean to bold just​​​​​​​?