Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-39530373-20190520191452/@comment-27575896-20190521153457

I’m gonna have to take a stand on this, your review was absolute garbage. You brought out only opinion, provided zero ways on how to improve the role, and constantly over-corrected every single thing. For fucks sake you even said the aspect of using a full moon was a Werewolf similarity. Nothing about these roles are similar, for fucks sake the Psychic gets results on full moons, but are you going to mention that? No, you won’t. This review was focused entirely on grammar and “bad, bad, bad”, probably brought on by their unfortunate part of being NEW TO WIKIA. You need something to mock them with. You mocked their Lore part, despite the fact Lore isn’t canon and that looked more like the description you get when you receive a role. And that looks a hell of a lot better.

You continued to correct his responses even after your ridiculous review, showing you put little effort into actually trying to improve the role and rather shun them off with your own view standards. Absolutely disgraceful.

Now then, for review standards:

The role functions way too overpowered just with the daily ability to kill with an Unstoppable Astral attack each night. No other NK has that ability, and the Juggernaut requires four total kills. And even then, they aren’t Astral, and most of the 15 people are dead but the time they get their Astral attack.

Possessing a player doesn’t serve a direct use other than to throw suspicion on themselves, but the issue is that this will lead to a lot of false reports, since you can say anything in their shoes and they can’t say anything back.

As a Neutral Killing, the role isn’t meant to work in ToS. However, the changed-up results could world better as the ability of a Neutral Evil, since that would apply.

For instance, you could scrap the role itself being a Neutral Killing and rather make a role that relies on changing up the results of investigative targets. Very little roles at the moment change up results, but if the whole killing and possessing part is scrapped, try to make a role that involves around changing up results but has a similar goal as a Neutral Evil.