Board Thread:Role Ideas (Mafia)/@comment-68.96.244.8-20180626015614/@comment-25615841-20180627131424

68.96.244.8 wrote: Alignment: Mafia Support

these are always fun

Unique: Yes (Coven Expansion exclusive)

riiight

Attack: None

good

Defense: None

double good

Summary: You wield mystical powers that gives the Mafia a second chance at life

nope.

Abilities:

- You can revive any dead Mafia Member

nope.

Attributes:

- You can only revive once

nope.

- If there are no capable mafia killings left, you will become a Mafioso

sounds good.

Mechanics:

The Mortician is a unique role there can never be more than one in a match. It also means that an Amnesiac cannot remember the Mortician.

balanced, at least

It is the only Mafia role that cannot be remembered by the Amnesiac

fair enough

Sheriff: Your target is a member of the Mafia!

great.

Investigator: Your target can either be a Medium, Janitor, Retributionist, Mortician, Necromancer, or Trapper

3-2-1-0. sounds good to me.

Consigliere: Your target wields mystical powers for evil. They must be a Mortician!

pretty bland. you can probably do better. Main points:

--Rehash. All there is to it. It's just a ret for the mafia. BMG prohibit roles that are the same as a role from another faction with small changes.

--It also breaks the no evil retributionists rule, which you can find in the link below. You know why this is a problem? You revive the mafia member and he gets shot/executed/hanged again, since he's confirmed to be evil.

--Also too powerful. The ret is already a broken role, and it has 9 players to choose from, most of which have weaker roles. This would revive one of three others, most of which are extremely powerful roles, like the godfather, consig or framer.

+At least you nailed the smaller things. The flavour, like the name and logic of the role is pretty good, and the results are quite well made.

Overall, I'd rate this a

rehash/10 IGN

Just remember that it really isn't easy to get your role to be approved my many, so if it doesn't get into the game, don't be too discouraged because very few actually do. Even with that I have to say that your idea is better than quite a lot of the roles out there :P

If you haven't already, please take a look at this page, it helps a lot when creating roles: http://town-of-salem.wikia.com/wiki/Making_New_Roles

Also, you're role is still above average, so I'd like to suggest you make an account. It would allow you to edit your own messages, and help us track you and your ideas. Additionally, you could also be come a part of this community :)