Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-31393335-20170602171219/@comment-29253708-20170602182959

Can I offer a change here?

''"Am I useful? Did I please you?" he whispered to the Coven Leader, his heart thumping.''

“Do it again.” the Coven Leader commanded, “You have a gift, and you will use it.”

The Poisoner was happy to agree.

Just, when I think about it, I think of the Coven Leader as the Godfather of the Coven, obviously. Most if not all the Mafia stories involve the Godfather commanding them to do something or whatever, so I think the Coven Leader should be the one the Poisoner is asking for acceptance.

Unless, of course, you're thinking of the Poisoner being the Potion Mater's apprentice, which I like the idea of.