Board Thread:Role Ideas (Town)/@comment-38593192-20191217085212/@comment-39067078-20200101220146

Since I haven't seen you around that much, I'll give you a long review -

Duwiiton's Problematic Reviews - Ranked order of noticeability.

Problem 1 - Change the formatting.

If you look at my formatting, I explain what it does easily in the Mechanics section, even if relatively. I cannot grasp what your role does by looking at one section, or even gain a basic understanding.

Problem 2 - Remove the unnescessary tumors.

We don't need a special effect if it has lasted 3 days or anything affecting living/dying messages. These are more "flavor" mechanics which exist for pure flavor.

Problem 3 - It is too powerful.

You thought it was underpowered with just delaying - you need to understand I made a role that did just that. It could allow doctors to heal people that were in the delayed stage - it acted as a second doctor which allowed for better management of who the doctor heals.

This role can stop Jester haunts, Plaguebearers - I don't think that should be allowed because of the already finnicky mechanics. A Jester should be able to kill who they want, there should be no townie capable of stopping that, even if temporarily.

Now we go onto the Duwiiton Problematic Rewards.

Award 1 - You looked back at your role and answered questions prematurely.

Looking back at your role to answer questions that may be common is a good way to spot your role.

Award 2 - You gave a lore? I usually don't review lores because most of the people here are terrible at writing them. I would seem overcritical if I did review them, and I may in the near future just to be more critical to push for improvement. Most people don't give lores, so I'm glad you gave one, albeit short.

Award 3 - You gave the correct priority.

Most people guess or just don't include priority because it's a hassle to get. You got the same one as doctor, which works out.