Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-94.54.244.89-20190916162101/@comment-31256456-20190918060932

94.54.244.89 wrote: Summoner Aligment:Neutral Evil Attack:None Defence:None Abilities:Choose someone to change their role to The Beast! Your ability can change unique roles(Except Jailor and veteran who does not have kills), but not a revealed role. When you are summoning you are immune to everything. If you are jailed at night you will summon The Beast, target will be randomly choosen. Objective:Summon The Beast and help/watch whem to kill everyone. Note:You can't use your ability until 4th night.And the beast will turn at 5th day. Beast will recive a message like that _Summoner choosed you to become The Beast and show your wrath to everyone!_ '''If you check the Role Review page that is accessible, it's going to give you a lot of useful information that will help you make this format easier to read.  A problem with this role is its very specific idea of winning- remember- hardcounters are generally hard to pull off in an actual ToS game and can be unbalanced. ​​​​​​​In this case, the role becomes useless if the Jailor is not present and also fails to do anything if a Jailor dies. '''

Beast Aligment:Neutral Killing Attack:Unstopable Defence:Unstopable Abilities:Choose someone to attack them and their visitors at night. You are immune to roleblocks and you will not kill roleblocker, but if you are jailed you will kill jailor. You just can be lynched, jesters guilt or jailors does not have effecct you. Objective:Kill everyone!

Invesyigation results:

Investigator:Your target can be Medium,Retributonist,Janitor,Necromancer,Trapper or Summoner. Consigliere:Your target is a maniac who wants to summen The Beast, they must be summoner! Sheriff:Your target is not suspicious.(At 4th night you will be seen as suspicious)

Every investigation riles will see this message if they check you-You target is someone who is unstopable killing machine, they are The Beast! Overall, there are a few suggestions I would give to this role.

1.  Let's try to fix this "reliance". Perhaps work with something that almost all roles or at least a large faction have.

2. Try to follow a specific format.

In doing this, you're allowing the role to have more breathing room for potential and allow the role to have a purpose.

I would also consider changing the role to NC, as it seems more of a NC style role.

Overall, good luck to you in your role-making journey. I hope my review was of assistance. I will follow this up if you have any questions.