Board Thread:Role Ideas (Coven)/@comment-37689320-20181202160001/@comment-28092296-20181202212343

As a side note, Jack Frost is acctually a character in BMG's official stories, and he wasn't with the Coven. That's not important, and here's my feedback:

Positive Stuff:

You've made the 'Freezing a target' ability more interesting. That's something that people have suggested before, but you went in a creative direction with it.

The Ice Wand sounds like a cool ability (albeit too similar to the Necronomicon).

Your role has the ability to kill one person per night, which is something people miss when designing Coven roles

Negative Stuff:

You didn't explain why this guy has Basic Defense.

You didn't explain what freezing a target does. If that roleblock the target, then that seems like a powerful Consort in my head.

You also didn't explain how Frost can kill. You just said he has basic attack. Does he kill freezed victims, is it its own ability, etc.

Your role is too complex. I don't see a reason why your second target disguises as the first. You don't need the Ice Wand when that seems exactly like the Necronomicon ability. I don't know why your target has death messages appear like they are the Coven Leader.

The Investigator result doesn't have Jack Frost in it.