Thread:69.127.181.199/@comment-24916742-20150331020312

DO NOT under ANY circumstances edit the stories on the role pages UNLESS you're making a spelling or wording fix. Do NOT replace it with your own. Your own Custom Stories need to go on the Custom Stories page. I've rolledback your edit. Below is a copy of your story if you want to add it to the Custom Stories page yourself;

It all started years ago, when he was a police officer. Banging his fist of the table, he lets out a cry of pure anger. Even thought he tried his very best, the men haven't even given him a glance. With them at the head of the comitee, his plan would never work. Not unless... A wicked maniacal grin streches his face and he staggers out the door with a kitchen knife. A quick stab, and it was all over. The fresh, wonderful felling washed over him like waves. But by now, his desire to kill grew and grew. One night, a dissagrement with his mother led him right back to the kitchen with his knife. A quick stab, all over. By now, he was wanted across the country. He is still at work... Every night. Is that shadow moving? No, its the Serial killer, slipping from the shadow into his victims house. Cackling delightedly, he stabs the unofortanete victim and slips back into his house, where his long-used knife and this bag is concealed. Humming, he returns to the outside world, full of lies and inventions to keep him in the clear, while the town mourned over their dead friend.  