Thread:TheRetroPioneer/@comment-28092296-20180502011818

Here's the same story but without the grammar mistakes & with some suggestions:

The Tracker was a happy citizen. They were very good (Very weak adjective choice) at their job, and had cought caught many members the Coven, but the m (Capitalization) Mafia allways elluded them. Eventually, they stummbled across a killing in prosses by the m Mafia, but there was a Lookout near the house, which (Add an "h") mis s took (Only has one "s") the Tracker for the killer. In the morning, the Lookout revealed this ("this" is a very weak word choice), but the Tracker managed to run from the town, making it (What does "it" mean in this context? NO, seriously, what does it mean?) all the way to Salem, where he gave up their his/her job as a t Tracker and has just  (Unnessesary word) been trying (add a "y") to keep their his/her past covered up ever sense  since (wrong word). 