Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-35836120-20180623120130/@comment-25615841-20180623173833

S0meguyyoukilled wrote: Name: Sovereign

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Alignment: Neutral Killing

sweet

Attack: Basic

looks good so far

Defense: Basic

this better be original

Unique Role: Yes oo

Priority: 5

im gonna assume you know what you're doing if you'er putting in priority

Abilities: (Day) Choose from one of your own irrevocable rules to be temporarily applied for the coming night.

'''a day ability? hold up. anyway, what.'''

(Night) Choose someone to check, with your applied rule for the night, your attack may depend if that happens or not

sounds complicated

Attributes:
 * Not choosing a rule will result in the Sovereign not being able to kill the next night.

makes sense


 * Choosing someone who cannot be killed (due to applied rule) will still result in you visiting them.

alright


 * Once you successfully kill 3 people, you gain Powerful Attack which lasts for the whole game

kind of a jugg rehash, but its changed a but at least


 * At the start of every night, everyone will be informed of what rule did you choose. (Even jailed targets.)

right.

Mechanics: Now during the day phase (Discussion, Voting, Trial) you can choose from either from 3 rules to be applied during the next night.

Choose from either:

"All involved In the art of Deception, and exhibit forms of craft shall be shown no mercy this night."

For this chosen rule anyone you visit at night with this role alignment will be attacked.

(All Town Support, Mafia Deception, Neutral Evil, Neutral Chaos)

"All intending to probe others, help, or provide, will see their own efforts gone to waste."

For this chosen rule anyone you visit at night with this role alignment will be attacked.

(All Town Protective, Town Investigative, Mafia Support, Neutral Benign)

"All who try to get their own hands dirty, will see their end with their own blood spilled in their own body tonight."

For this chosen rule anyone you visit at night with this role alignment will be attacked.

(All Town Killing, Mafia Killing, Neutral Killing, Coven Evil)

-Investigative Results-

Sheriff: "Your target Is a Sovereign!"

thank god we're not nerfing sheriff

Investigator: "Your target is waiting for the perfect moment to strike, they could be a Sheriff, Executioner, Werewolf, Poisoner or Sovereign.

'''1-0-1-3. Kind of lobsided, not sure about this one. but the lore does check out'''

Consigliere/Witch: "Your target possess daunting power, being feared by many. Your target must be a Sovereign."

Seems kind of general, but at least theres good description

Goal: Kill anyone who would oppose you

Wins With: Survivor, Witch, Pirate, Guardian Angel

mhm

Must Kill: Town, Mafia, Vampires, Arsonist, Werewolf, Coven, Juggernaut, Plaguebearer, Pestilence

yesiree

Anything Else: Dunno, I'm open to suggestions, hope that helps.

It's kind of balanced? Since It still has it's drawbacks, but I don't even have an idea how to make an NK stronger lol. And I kinda also tried my best to review some of the rules to making new role idea soooo... I don't know much what to do about the role, so I'll just give it a go, and hope for the best.

Yes. Main points:

+This is kind of a small thing, but I think this really fits its alignment. It feels like a real, proper NK. +All of the small things, including results and stats appear to be well done, so not much change needed there.

++This is really original. The ability is awesome, and the use of the basic NK template is really effective here. I like it a lot.

++Also, for a role like this, it seems supprisingly well balanced. I'd say it's more powerful than a WW or Arso, but around the same as an SK. Also bonus poins for the role categories. Both the lore and balance are perfect.

-This doesn't really deserve a full point, but if there is something that should be improved besides the name, there isn't much. Even the invest result isn't that bad.

Overall, I like this lore a ton.

+Gold star, this is going on my profile

I'd give it a

hell yes/10 IGN

Just remember that it really isn't easy to get your role to be approved my many, so if it doesn't get into the game, don't be too discouraged because very few actually do. Even with that I have to say that your idea is better than quite a lot of the roles out there :P

If you haven't already, please take a look at this page, it helps a lot when creating roles: http://town-of-salem.wikia.com/wiki/Making_New_Roles