Talk:Vigilante/@comment-138.68.70.63-20170228121500

FAN story, Comment below also made by me The year is 1897, A war broke out...A severe one, Alfred Corey is a trooper, That is going head first to the floor of death.... Alfred had allot of friends, From the war, The war casualties are very severe, Alfred was caught, Taken, And about to die From a firing squad....along with his friends, Alfred didn't die,He didn't get hit once, He pretended to be dead, Can't say the same for Alfred's friends..Alfred ran, And came back to his house, With sorrow, But he got married, And his wife gave birth Giles corey. In the town of craco, Giles corey learned many things....Witnessed many things, Like a man beating a child. ...People drinking poison together, He visited a witch's house, Though abandoned by the witch, He found alot of intresting stuff,And he found a picture and a note, A picture of a beautiful man, The note said "Why did my son have to die....DAN MATHER KILLED MY SON, HE DIDN'T HAVE TO DIE, HE'S AN INNOCENT PERSON WHO JUST WANTS TO NOT DIE" Giles corey was infuriated by dan.....He exited the house, He took a knife from the kitchen of his house....His mission was to kill dan mather, He investigated, And investigated, But to no avail, He...Layed in his bed, Tired, And sad..... *Gunshot* *Gunshot* What was that? Giles said...He gone downstairs, He sees a black figure, Heading towards him, He went upstairs and hid below his bed, The Shadow figure goes to giles door, Opens it.....He then waits for a few seconds, He then goes to the window, Looking outside...Giles thinked "Black hair? THIS MUST BE A TRESSPASSER, NON OF MY PARENTS ARE BLACKHAIRED" Giles goes behind the unknown person and slits their throat.."There.." a paper fell from the figure...It turns out it's a will, With a biography of Dan Mather....Giles thought what were the gunshots? Gile's mother Lies dead, While father lies bleeding.... Giles calls the doctor, Father was saved......Giles Said to father "WHAT HAPPENED", "A serial killer they're"Alfred says, Giles says "MOTHERS DEAD" While bursting into tears..., Alfred cries too...Alfred says"You killed dan mather, You should go to the town of salem" "What?" Giles says "They're in a desperate need of a Vigilante, And you're the one...." Alfred gives his revolver to Giles....Alfred says..."Come to me after you're done..."