Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-75.158.107.156-20191019045713/@comment-44236982-20191026200051

'''Warning you now: I am unbelievably tired and therefore if I am being a total bitch I am sorry. '''

Anyways [Let's Get Started.]

Bold = What I like Italics = Needs to be improved or get rid of 

[These are my text brackets for input.]

you are a corrupted retributionist,summoning zombies to end the world and recreate it.

{*Sigh*} 

['''And like that I already need to tell you that this role isn't going to work. Period. I'm really sorry to say it but here is why. This has been a role that the forums have spoken about again. And again. And again. And again. And won't stop talking about it. Even with the coven update, the problem with it isn't that it's a bad idea. It's the it just won't be worth the time and effort to implement. Some people have stated they would bring back actual people from the dead and it would look like a retributionist brought them back to look unique and form their own faction, but this is simply impossible to see working with the fact that with everybody leaving, it makes the role damn near pointless. But I will... try and give help.]'''

Attack:none

'''[Wait- WHAT? So you're giving them a neutral killing role but they- don't have any attack. Not even a basic one. That makes no sense to me. In the future, try to consider this.]'''

Def:none

[Defenseless neutral killing makes babies cry.]

abilities:slowly summon zombies at night to start an apocalypse

attributes:each night,you summon zombies to form an army to kill people in their sleep.

'''[Not good or bad but I'm curious: are these just random zombies? Isn't this just Plaguebearer but with zombies now?]'''

it takes you 5 days to summon all the zombies and start attacking.

'''[Wait...what. Not only is the close to the vigilante, but you're basically telling me to kill ONE person you need to wait five days.]'''

when the zombies are summoned,you gain powerful defense

[I mean you could've had that from the beginning but- okay...]

you will seem to be a retributionist to invest roles on non full moon nights

sheriff

full moon:your target seems suspicious

non full moon:your target seems innocent

'''[Nothing wrong with it I just don't know how I feel about it. I think it's just better to leave it- if it would've worked- as the retributionist results because it's not like arsonist or anything. There's not really any other roles that change like that...]'''

invest:your target is a medium,retributionist,witch,executioner,or deathlord

'[These results are not accurate. Sheriff/Werewolf/Executioner go together. Medium/Retributionist/Janitor are the accurate results, and I'd honestly not see this going with anything but the Retributionist group.]'

consig

'''[You know what I'm tired, just see the reason before. It should be specific and Consigs results remain accurate for everyone else. Ergo, this also needs to be precise.]'''

full moon:your target wants to end the world. they must be a deathlord

non full moom:your target can revive the dead,they must be a retributionist

'''[Anyways, it was a good attempt but unfortunately it wouldn't work. Some key things to remember in the future: try thinking in advance about the basics before going into implementation. Basically if you're making a neutral killing role you have to be smart about it think about the other neutral killing roles in the game and how they're worked into the game. Think to yourself: how does the role impact the game?]'''