Board Thread:Role Ideas (Other)/@comment-104.230.36.252-20180604004734/@comment-25615841-20180625172658

104.230.36.252 wrote: Bisnessman

'''Businessman* ;-;. Also, they didn't exist in 1692 when the game takes place, so its a no from me'''

Also, no alignment.

He came here to get more money than ever before. That bisnessman that brought him here was a man that was recently lynched for being a member of the mafia, the group that was causing the mayhem that the bisnessman had walked into.The bisnessman comes from a far city and is very rich. As he realized that soon, the time would come where the came and killed him for his money.Fearing this, he got the idea to sell all of his possessions to a person that would give him all of his possessions in return, therefore giving him a chance to make it back to home!!! Knocking at the 's door, he quickly strucked a deal.Later, far after the bisnessman, which was now a Sheriff left, the new Bisnessman knew he had been scammed. two nights later, the new Bisnessman walked into a suspicious house down the street. Before he could even scream, the Serial Killer stabbed him to bloody pieces.

not here to review stories City chaos'

Role description:

You are a conman who uses bribes and trickery to gain support from the !

Defense: none

Attack: none

results: ////Bisnessman

0-1-1-3. But it's this invest result, so that's perfectly acceptable.

results: Your target is a member of the high ranking class, the city

No. This should end with Your target is a businessman.

// results Your target plays with money, they must be part of the City!!!

No. This should end with Your target is a businessman.

Abilities:

Every full- moon night, you may do bisness with a person.

business* >:l

Attributes:

If your bisness partner is a ,(but not a ),, , (when he hasn't lynched his target), or (When he hasn't plundered twice), you will switch roles with said person. (You will keep the 's target or how many times the {{Pirate plundered)

'''Original, but a role switcher. NO.'''

If your bisness partner is a or Kill one  on a non - full moon night, or a {{Town}} or {{Town}} that already won, or a {{Town}}, {{Town}}, or {{Town}}(on nights they can't convert), you will not get a trade.

which tells you your target is evil, ok

If your bisness partner is a member of the {{Town}}, {{Town}}, {{Town}}(for {{Town}}, a night they can convert), or is a {{Town}}, or {{Town}} on a night they can kill, or {{Town}}, they will attack you instead.(Convert for {{Town}}, although they will not stop the feasting already happening, and two players will be converted to vampire

alright

Special: Control immune

Goal: trade for a role that can win.

ah, at least the goal is decent. Main points:

+Original, at least. There's no role like this one, and it has a completely new ability, which is great news.

-The lore. I know this isn't the most important part of a role idea, but there weren't businessmen during the salem witch trials. Not the kind this role presents, anyway.

-Kind of incomplete? It has no alignment, and the Sheriff and Consig result doesn't really make sense, so I'm really just confused here--

--Sadly, this is a role switcher. These are strictly prohibited.

Overall, I'd give this a

please no/10 IGN

Just remember that it really isn't easy to get your role to be approved my many, so if it doesn't get into the game, don't be too discouraged because very few actually do. Even with that I have to say that your idea is better than quite a lot of the roles out there :P

If you haven't already, please take a look at this page, it helps a lot when creating roles: http://town-of-salem.wikia.com/wiki/Making_New_Roles

Also, I'd like to interest you in making an account. It allows you to edit your posts, and would help us track you and your role ideas easier. In addition, it would help you a lot in becoming part of this commuity :)

For anyone complaining that this is a revive; it is, but it's an unreviewed role idea. It's worth the revive.