Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-124.191.10.201-20170116122121/@comment-33007077-20170116132752

124.191.10.201 wrote: Role: Phantom Alignment: Neutral (Killing)

*inhales and exhales* This better go well.

You are a being of pure evil, your only desire is to cause suffering.

haunt someone every night.

Haunted targets will appear to have committed suicide.

And then everyone knows there's a Phantom because the people who commited suicide didn't leave.

Bring suffering to your peers **

'''Peers? Peers?! PEERS?! Giles Corey is a old man while John Proctor is like in his 30s. '''

Wins with: Phantoms Survivors

Must kill: Town Mafia Vampires Witches Serial killers Arsonists Werewolf

'''Hold up. You're saying WITCHES need to die? That's not gud.'''

Investigative reports Sheriff - Your target is a Phantom

And then you're f***ed even if the sheriff dies.

Investigator - Your target works with dead bodies, they could be Medium, Janitor, Retributionist or Phantom **

Consig - Your target haunts their enemies, they are a Phantom

'''Your target likes to make people suffer. They must be a Phantom.'''

Priority - 4

Immunities - Bite Immunity

And then you're f***ed if someone attacks you.

I posted this with the intention of getting actual feedback, please keep thid in mind.

Any thing marked with ** are thing I am unsure of.

I look forward to understanding how the you view this role, and how you think it could improve. This has possibly NO chance of getting it. A NK without night immunity, easy exposure about a phantom, which is why it should just be haunted by a phantom, not detection immune, and this is basicially like a Serial Killer over again.

Result: 3/10

In other words...

REJECTED!