Board Thread:Role Ideas (Neutral)/@comment-30803131-20170401221416/@comment-32487879-20170401224227

EgePGN wrote: As said before, I am still working my first role idea ever to be something unique. For my second post I actually got one 'ACCEPTED' so that means I am in the right way. '''...sure??? Some guys aren't exactly the great at role reviewing. I'm great at it, tho, (smirks off to the side)'''

But i am not done yet. There was still 3 or 4 REJECTs so i have to improve this role even more.

Hider

Neutral Benign

You are a scared little kid who hides at others' houses at night. You also have a secret power that nobody, even you , knows about.

'''Uh... that doesn't even make remote sense. BUT OKAY THEN!'''

Ability : Hide in someone's house at night. If you do not do anything in the night (does not include being roleblocked) you will die from a heart attack.


 * From what? The pain of not seeing other people? (actually that kind of makes sense
 * And you should say "Every night, hide in someone's house to pass the night."

Special Attributes : None


 * But you said special powers... ah, who cares.

While hiding in someone's house, they will not know you are hiding. For example, if you hide in a Veteran's house at night while they are on alert, you will not die.


 * Alright then. So you're living on other people's property and being a horrible person?

ADDED : The Lookout will know that you visited the target's house .


 * GOOD. MAKES LOOKOUT USEFUL.

If the Bodyguard visits the player that you are hiding with, the Bodyguard will NOT protect you.


 * Uh... doesn't the Bodyguard just kill anyone at the door? It's like, "HEY IM THE GODFATHAH", "OH MEH GURD YOU EVIL", "HELL YEAH I AM",


 * BANG


 * And doth these two, via Texan style, DIE.


 * Why would the Hider fall victim?

If your hiding house is visited by a Werewolf, Godfather or a Serial Killer, you will die.


 * Okay, SK and WW make sense. But GF? What, because he's more skilled than a Mafioso? Eh, I'll let it slide.

If your hiding house is visited by an Investigator, Sherrif or Consiglere , they will get the message A Hider was hiding in your target's house !


 * You spelled a couple things wrong. Also, dare I mention that YOUR PUNCTUATION IS SLIGHTLY TRIGGERING ME?


 * ...sorry.

If your hiding house is visited by a Vampire Hunter, Vigilante or a Mafioso , they will not see you and you will live on.


 * Vampire Hunter, because he's only dedicated to killing Vamps? And wouldn't the Vig want to... oh right. He has only one bullet. He wouldn't care about anyone else visiting.

The spy will not know where you hid.


 * SEEMS LEGIT

If your hiding place's owner is doused that night, you will also be doused.


 * Alright, where's the lore on this one? Is it the whole "oil on the house" or "oil on you, mate"? Any Arsonist Historians out there?

If a Vampire visits your hiding place , they will bite you ONLY if they do not exceed the limit of the Vampire there can be, that being 5 .'''


 * DUDE DON'T COPY PASTE FROM VISUAL EDITOR. COPY PASTE FROM SOURCE EDITOR. PLZZZZ.


 * Seriously, having to see all of that weirdly formatted text is making my OCD go off.

Goal : Survive untill the very end of the game or become a Ghost.


 * UMM WHAT GHOST


 * ALSO SURVIVOR REHASH, BUT ITS STILL HOBO

Sheriff: Your target is not suspicious.


 * How would they find out? The hider would've left the house by now, considering they're get a goddamn HEART ATTACK.

 Investigator investigate result :  Your target keeps to themselves. They could be a Survivor, Hider  , Witch or Vampire Hunter.


 * Dear god. You put BOTH SURVIVOR ROLES TOGETHER?


 * PLZ NO

'''If you succesfully hide in the shadows without being touched ( Being doused, investigated or roleblocked ) , you will unleash a hidden power that has been inside you all along and become a Ghost. '''


 * NO! THAT'S BAD. EXTREMELY BAD.

Ghost

Neutral Killing
 * NO. NOOOOO NO NO NO NO NO. I'M STOPPING RIGHT HERE.

Dude. Neutral Benign is supposed to pick a side.

NOW YOU'RE GONNA CONVERT IT TO NEUTRAL KILLING? WHO WILL WIN BY THEMSELVES???

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 * ...you hear footsteps, far in the distance.


 * Sounds like your time as role-making is up.